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Tuesday, December 06, 2005

Meet Unimara

Marukesh Army (so far)
Mikeen- Teleer
General -Cavalry- Jorgin
-Striker Cavalry (guerilla force)- Commander- Tupuday
-Light Cavalry- (flanking)Commander
-Heavy Cavalry (head-on centerfield)- Commander
-Infantry- Unimara
-Guard- Commander– Javen
-Body- Captain
-Light- Captain
-Foot- Commander– Kalifa
-Irregular (shock) Captain
-Regular (remainder)
-Lances (captain)
-regular- swords, axes, hammers (captain)
-heavy weapons- catapults, siege engines, etc. (captain)
-Archer Core- Katearo
-cross bows
-regular bows
-mobile (horse back)
-Supply- Mahenion
-Reconnaissance- Themas (these are long range army guys)
-spies: people who are planted in specific locations or are attached to specific people in order to gather information
-scouts: jacks-of-all-trades, these boys scout out army positions, routes to travel and places to settle. They also hunt, track, and observe the wild. Work as messengers. They are always just a little to the left of the law and are notoriously independent. Jorgin’s son becomes one.


Characters:

*Mikeen Voonkayos Teleer MaKen* 6'

Friends:
Themas- 5'10" general, friend, advisor- younger than Teleer
Unimara- 5'9" Ani -general of the infantry
Jorgin- 6'1" general, friend, advisor- same age as Teleer
Curmamand- mentor and advisor of Teleer

Family:
Tafa- 1st wife tame but loyal
Breen- 2nd wife exceedingly stupid easily influenced, follower of Fleur
Bama- 3rd wife dies in childbirth along with Teleer's 1st child- it was a daughter
Fleur- 5'5" 4th wife- psychotic, gets Unimara banished,
Pada- younger sister by two years, Jorgin’s wife- one son, not important
Miend- younger sister by five years, Themas’s wife- children ?, smuggles a lot of things for ani
The twins: T’s unknown kids by Ani (unnamed as of yet) the girl is A the boy is B
T’s daughter: (unnamed as of yet) she is C

Politicians:
Ohtesh- Marban's conqueror- stops the civil war by conquering everything
Lord Calhoos-
Curmamand- mentor and advisor of Teleer
Themas- general, friend, advisor- younger than Teleer

Army:
Themas- general, friend, advisor- younger than Teleer
Unimara- Ani -general of the infantry
Jorgin- general, friend, advisor- same age as Teleer
Katearo- general of the archer core
Mahenion- supply general- older 45/50
Mikli- The scout "leader"

Historians:
Pasjidwa: the world expert on Teleer

Gods:
Mara- Northern goddess of just causes.
Mogk- Marukesh god of logic

Other:
the red-haired cavalryman w/ the small spotted horse:

Battles:
Dumair
Bermai

Skirmishes: Tekli (happened at Pashku the sometimes island)

Nations:
Dumair- wealthy southern port
Maruk- Teleer's home nation
Pasi- gateway city to the north, impossible to conquer from w/o
Marban- Maruk's equal to the south

Factoids:
-Ani is only 17 when she meets Teleer. He is 24. Jorgin is also 24, Themas is 22.

Time line:
0: Birth of Teleer
22: Construction of Teleer's palace begins
24: Teleer meets Ani
24.5: Dumair is "settled", Teleer establishes his new capital here
25.7: Death of Captain Imkil of the Irregular Foot
24.7: Ani is promoted to Captain of the Irregular Foot
24.11: Ani is promoted to Commander of the Guard
25.4.12: Siege of Shamkurk
25.4.17: Death of Commander Zitu Oolan of the Foot
25.6: Ani is transferred to Commander of the Foot
26: Teleer finishes conquest all of the territories surrounding Maruk
26.3: Ani is promoted to General of the Infantry
27: Teleer starts conquering the lands to the north (below Pasi). Themas and Unimara begin to stabilize his previously conquered lands and new empire
29: The lands are conquered. Pasi cannot be taken and wont surrender so Teleer sets to work on the S. coast.
30: He marries Fleur, beginning of diplomatic conquest. Makes the city-state of Dumair his capital. Sets up real defenses for the city and man’s it with a real guard troop.
30.4: Fleur miscarries
30.6: While he is away on a diplomatic visit Fleur gets Ani accused of treason for attempting her assassination.
30.8 He returns but does nothing to rescue her, he is torn by her "betrayal". He leaves her in a cell for two months. Jorgin intervenes and manages to get him to see her in her cell. They shag and he allows her "escape" a month later. Themas and his wife arrange it. She is now sentenced to exile instead of execution. She vanishes.
31.5: She gives birth to twins at Della’s. Teleer has begun to seriously unravel and is constantly drunk.
31.8: Jorgin leaves and vanishes. He finds her at Della’s and convinces her to leave the children. He couldn't follow Teleer anymore he was going insane. They head to Pasi to work on organizing the rebels there.
31.11: the revolution in Pasi is successful
32: Teleer finds out the revolution has been successful. Rushes to try and negotiate. Ani now rules and rejects his offers.
32.9: Themas leaves. Teleer was trying to make him do crazy things. Teleer’s conquered lands are beginning to rebel.
33: Ohtesh lands on Teleer's shores. Wants to go up against another conqueror. Ohtesh has ego problems bigger than Fleur, though he is more sane. He is also fairly stupid. Wins thru brawn alone. Has and army twice Teleer's size.
33.4: Teleer is getting his ass handed to him. His leaders are deserting him. He's about to give up. Ani hears and at risk to her life visits and reams him. Tells him that Pasi will be his if he wins against Ohtesh (she took it for him anyway but couldn’t give it to him out of pride- his. He is the type that needs to conquer what he controls. If she simply gave it to him it would make him look like the lesser strategist.), and pardons her. Tells him that she will return and assist in his fight if he kills Fleur. He does so in three days. (He hates Fleur at this point so he strangles her with glee). Jorgin and Themas also return at the urging of Ani with whom they now reside in Pasi.
34.2: Ohtesh is defeated in the battle of Bermai. Teleer and his Generals are all there and in proud form
34.4: Pasi officially becomes a part of Teleer's new nation.
34.6: Marban also cedes to Maruk and Teleer. They weren’t a nation before Ohtesh and weren’t happy living under him. He was a fickle brutal man and a horrid leader.
35: The flare-ups are been put down. Telfer's army is once again restored and his people (true Maruk’s) are once again in charge. Teleer begins to plan the conquest of the N. Teleer attempts to get her to marry him. She refuses. They do become lovers.
36: The palace is finished. Conquest of the North begins. Teleer's second daughter is born. Ani dies in childbirth. She was 29.
37: Jorgin is declared guardian and regent of Teleer's Daughter. The twins have been "forgotten".
38: Teleer receives a fatal wound in the battle of Cotar. It was an arrow bolt that was moving so hard and fast it went on to kill the man behind Teleer after passing clean through his chest plate. Jorgin immediately assumes command and Teleer's conquests are not lost through his brilliant leadership. No new conquests are made. Jorgin is 38, Themas is 36. Teleer’s twins are 6 and ½ his youngest daughter is two.
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48: The twins run away from Della. They are not like her other kids. They are stronger, faster, smarter, and more resilient. They also have volatile tempers. They head immediately for Pasi, from which they get a "calling" feeling, and with which they feel a strange affinity.
50: The twins are separated when the boy (B) is caught stealing and sold into slavery to pay off his "debt".
53: The girl (A) has met up with a wealthy merchant. He trains her to become a courtesan or "court spy". She knows how to manipulate everything, and how to get the information she needs in whatever way she wants. The merchant takes her to Dumair. The boy (B) has become a gladiator. A fighter in violent games for the entertainment of the wealthy.
53.4: A goes to a gladiator game and sees her brother. She arranges to meet him. They meet and she gets him freed. They are both sociopaths. Together they begin to conquer the court of Dumair. They both feel like the throne should belong to them and work to steal it.
54: Teleer’s known daughter © realizes that the twins must be stopped and works to fight them.
54.2: The twins know it is easiest to take what is given arrange to have B woo C. She is not interested.
54.6: A decides that C is a problem as she cannot be controlled and must be removed. A begins to array her "forces" against C. Fortunately C is smart and is well trained by Jorgin. She knows she cannot out manipulate A, so she walks up to A and stabs her during a full court "meeting". She then declares A a traitor and says she was protecting her crown. She then defies anyone to challenge her. Without A’s presence her influence melts away. B tries to attack C immediately after A’s death but fails when A’s lover shoots him with a bow. (Jorgin’s son).

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